托福獨立寫作對考生詞匯運(yùn)用方面的要求中,比較重要也是相當(dāng)基礎(chǔ)的一點就是不要用錯詞匯。然而這許多同學(xué)卻總是會在詞匯上摔個跟頭。
1、托福獨立寫作詞匯錯誤:主謂一致
我們來看以下句子:
Admittedly, books written on the basis of realities is valuable to most people.
A less complicated social environment is the most agreeable condition that help maintain the simplicity of children’s mental world.
第一句句子的主語是books,因此謂語動詞應(yīng)該用復(fù)數(shù)形式are而不是is,這就是“主謂一致”,即:謂語動詞在單復(fù)數(shù)形式上要和主語保持一致。因此原句的正確表達(dá)為:Admittedly, books written on the basis of realities are valuable to most people.
第二句句子的主語是a less complicated social environment,謂語動詞應(yīng)該用單數(shù)形式helps. 因此原句的正確表達(dá)為:A less complicated social environment is the most agreeable condition that helps maintain the simplicity of children’s mental world.
2、托福獨立寫作詞匯錯誤:謂語動詞的表現(xiàn)形式
我們來看以下句子:
Most students like to watch TV cannot finish their homework in time.
Children who find passion in sports holding on to this passion throughout life, which leads to a healthier and more successful future.
第一句句子中l(wèi)ike to watch TV和cannot finish their homework in time都是謂語動詞,一般而言,兩個謂語動詞需要用連詞(如and或but)進(jìn)行連接,或者可以將like to watch TV變?yōu)閺木洌纾篗ost students who like to watch TV cannot finish their homework in time(定語從句).
第二句句子沒有謂語。句子中who find passion in sports是修飾children的“定語從句”,which leads to a healthier and more successful future是以which為引導(dǎo)的“非限定性定語從句”。整句句子的謂語動詞應(yīng)該是hold,而不應(yīng)該使用非謂語形式(holding)。在托福獨立寫作中尤其要注意there be句型中“謂語的表現(xiàn)形式”,如:
There are a great variety of articles and topics accurately reflect the diversity of users’ interest.
因為there be句型中的be本身就是謂語成分,所以不能使用reflect,而應(yīng)改為:There are a great variety of articles and topics that accurately reflect the diversity of users’ interest(定語從句);或There are a great variety of articles and topics accurately reflecting the diversity of users’ interest(非謂語結(jié)構(gòu))。
3、托福獨立寫作詞匯錯誤:謂語動詞的語態(tài)
“語態(tài)”表現(xiàn)的是主語和謂語之間的關(guān)系,托福獨立寫作中主要使用“主動語態(tài)”,不建議頻繁使用“被動語態(tài)”。
我們來看以下句子:
Many children can avoid their most disliked courses if they are given the opportunity to choose.
Because the content of an e-book is delivered electronically to their devices, students can shop for e-books and receive them almost immediately, any time of the day or night.
第一句句子中“避免最不喜歡的課程”動作的發(fā)出者是“孩子們”,因此是“主動語態(tài)”;而他們“被”提供機(jī)會進(jìn)行選擇是“被動”的。第二句句子中“電子書的內(nèi)容”和“將電子版本傳輸?shù)綄W(xué)生的設(shè)備之中”是“被動”的關(guān)系,而學(xué)生“購買電子圖書”和“不管白天還是黑夜,可以第一時間收到這些圖書”都是“主動”的關(guān)系。 |