想要寫出一篇好的作文,步驟是至關(guān)重要的,就算是留學(xué)課程托福也是如此,下面分享托福的正確步驟。
Step 1:審題
知識(shí)點(diǎn)回顧之“絕對(duì)題”破題法:
破題法一: agree -- 證明絕對(duì)詞存在的必要性或和合理性;
破題法一: disagree -- 世事無絕對(duì);
1. 準(zhǔn)確定義“the most important”
2. 時(shí)間線的完整度 -- during our lifetime
3. 定準(zhǔn)論證核心 -- why
Step 2 :確定framework
Position: disagree
讓步:
part 1: 承認(rèn)合理性 -- some problems have been dramatically solved
Part 2: 弱化合理性 -- other problems have not been solved
反駁:reasons
1. humans’ flaws;
2. problems may keep worsening
Generally【適當(dāng)添加副詞緩和信息推進(jìn)速度--注意節(jié)奏由慢到快】,there emerge an increasing number of vital problems in modern society. However, whether human can fix these troubles during our lifetime【主語(yǔ)從句】 is still an controversial issue. From my perspective, hardly can such problems be solved during that period【小短句也可設(shè)置語(yǔ)法點(diǎn) -- 部分倒裝句】.
Admittedly【不要忘記讓步段信息詞】, some matters have been dramatically solved. 【話題過于抽象時(shí)活用例證】 Take the illiteracy as an example. Owing to the economic growth, the government and private firms can provide sufficient resources to support the education. To be specific, they can set up some scholarships and student loans【貸款】 to children who cannot afford the tuition【限制性定語(yǔ)從句】. In that case, the educational degree has been drastically increased in some poverty-stricken【貧困的】 areas or underdeveloped countries. However【轉(zhuǎn)折弱化其合理性】, the matters like poverty can not be settled【解決】 in our lives. Although people have struggled to eliminate the poverty for centuries【讓步狀語(yǔ)從句】, a great number of people cannot have access to the basic necessities even in some developed countries like America. That situation will continue in the subsequent【接下來的】 centuries【未解決的問題要提及“future”的情況--保證扣題度】
The first reason why those problems always exist is that human themselves are born with some imperfections【表語(yǔ)從句】. As is known, many of defects can never be overcome, so the problems, which are the result of the deficiencies[deficiency缺陷]【非限制性定語(yǔ)從句】, can also never be addressed. For instance, many entrepreneurs are driven by their greed so that they make profits at the expense of the environment, thus prompting【促使】 serious environmental troubles such as air pollution or soil degradation【現(xiàn)在分詞做結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)】. What’ more, if people want to alleviate【緩和】the problems【條件狀語(yǔ)從句】, they should devote not only a large sum of money but also tremendous effort in the next few generations. Secondly, problems may keep worsening【考生可根據(jù)建議思路自行練習(xí)】..... |