2021年09月25日托福【寫作】回憶和解析

　　《綜合點(diǎn)評》這次托?？荚噷懽鞑糠终w難度中等。其中，綜合寫作考查社科類，重復(fù)2019.4.13線下原題，整體難度適中。獨(dú)立寫作考查孩子是否過分依賴電子設(shè)備，難度中等，重復(fù)2021年4月家考原題/2017.9.16線下原題。

　　《綜合寫作》

　　【話題分類】社科類【考題回憶】總論點(diǎn) 做志愿活動的好處和壞處

　　【閱讀部分】閱讀是說要求學(xué)生做志愿活動的三個壞處：

　　1、他們可能會cheat，學(xué)校沒辦法監(jiān)督，比如他們在家里的花園干了點(diǎn)活，他們就會寫上他們幫鄰居除了兩個小時草。

　　2、實(shí)際上是drive他們away from志愿活動，因?yàn)樽鲋驹负笏麄儾拍苣玫絛iploma，會讓他們覺得cynical，就是如果沒有好處的話人們是不會做志愿活動的

　　3、violate了他們的rights

　　【聽力部分】聽力反駁了三個觀點(diǎn)，覺得三個觀點(diǎn)都can he answered：

　　1、學(xué)校有個list寫了哪些活動是可以被算進(jìn)去，而且必須是recognized associations搞的活動，比如閱讀那個例子，學(xué)生想被計(jì)入做了gardening的話，他要做neighborhood associations辦的list里面有的園藝，并且要在一個public spot里面做

　　2、其實(shí)并沒有drive學(xué)生away，一些去了醫(yī)院服務(wù)的和做了tutor的學(xué)生說他們獲得了powerful and great experience，所以其實(shí)是give them chance to有一些不同的體驗(yàn)，增加他們未來想做volunteer work的motivation

　　3、沒有violate學(xué)生的權(quán)利，after all他們本來就要回學(xué)校上學(xué)，就好像要上數(shù)學(xué)課一樣，他們被要求做志愿活動也不是violation

　　【解題思路】傳統(tǒng)四段式寫作，每一段閱讀內(nèi)容+聽力內(nèi)容，注意細(xì)節(jié)和同義替換

　　【參考范文】Both the reading and the lecture are talking about whether the students should do volunteer activities. The author of the reading claims that there are three setbacks of doing them. However, the lecturer challenges this perspective by providing three reasons.

　　The reading first claims that the students might cheat and there is no way that school can supervise their activities. The lecturer, however, rebuts this by mentioning that schools have a form for students to fill in, showing which activities are counted and which are not. And the list in the form enlisted all the specifics of the activities. For instance, regarding the gardening activities in the reading, the lecturer proposes that the school requires students to do the gardening within the list of neighborhood associations and do them in public spot.

　　Secondly, the reading passage conceives that doing volunteer activities make students cynical, because they feel the activities are utilitarian ideas. They do them for the sake of getting the diploma. The listening, by contrast, says that they actually did not drive students away，since the students who tutored in the hospital said they actually got powerful and great experience.In the final analysis, the writer in the reading asserts that doing volunteer activities violated their rights. The professor in the lecture points out that if taking a volunteer activities can be counted as violation, then so does the requirement of students taking math classes.

　　《獨(dú)立寫作》

　　【話題分類】社會現(xiàn)象類

　　【考題回憶】

　　Do you agree or disagree with the following statement：

　　Nowadays, children rely too much on the technology, like computers, smartphone, video games, for fun and entertainment. Playing simpler toys or playing outside with friends would be better for the children's development.

　　【解題思路】同意第二個觀點(diǎn)，原因：

　　1.簡單玩具和與小伙伴玩?？梢耘囵B(yǎng)孩子的常識;

　　2.可以增加他們成長的復(fù)雜性;

　　3.可以減少焦慮。

　　【參考范文】

　　There are various ways to develop children. While some people consider that children should concentrate on simpler toys or playing outside with friends instead of using several technologies, others do not believe. It is so controvertible for people to determine a specific conclusion. In my view, young people should play the usual toys and hang out with friends outside for their growth. They can gain common sense, attain plenty of friends, and focus on plays without concerns.

　　To begin with, young people establish common sense by playing outside with friends and uncomplicated toys. People have to hold common sense in bountiful situations of society. This knowledge often gives people opportunities at an early age. For instance, when young people play with friends outside, they have to communicate with others as much as possible. If they do not create conversations with others, they will not be capable of satisfying with pleasure. As a result, children should not rely on some technologies but play with friends and regular toys.

　　Secondly, playing toys or outside with friends produces children sophisticated development. It is so limited for the progress of children to be educated by parents or teachers. Their friends diverse the possibility of their evolutions. For example, they sometimes obtain the situation to care about their friends about anxieties while playing outside. From this experience, they acquire how to treat humans and stand by their friends. Therefore, their personality will advance more than young people who rely on many technologies.

　　Finally, children devote on plays without anxieties to play simple toys and with friends outside. They have to remind many operations to exploit the technologies for entertainment. In the television games, they keep in mind how to press bottoms for complete missions. On the other hand, with simple toys and plays outside with friends, they just converge on pleasure because these activities do not include hard rules and principles. Consequently, young people should spend on their time with simple toys and friends outside for their growth.