Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

　　University education should be free for students and financed by the government tax.

　　Step 1:審題

　　本道題屬于絕對題的范疇，討論的中心事件是“大學(xué)教育是否應(yīng)該由政府稅收來資助”;

　　Step 2:論點(diǎn)梳理

　　知識點(diǎn)回顧之分論點(diǎn)構(gòu)思方式：

　　1. 確定題目中的對象詞或利益相關(guān)者：2.從上述角度分析pros & cons;

　　以此題為例，題目中出現(xiàn)的對象詞包含students/government/universities/education【構(gòu)思時(shí)可多加注意抽象視角】;

　　Agree -- should be financedDisagree -- should not be financed

　　For students who have not entered into the colleges: provide educational opportunities[especially those in poverty-stricken areas]Students are less likely to hold an earnest attitude towards their study

　　For students who have entered into the colleges: get more resources for scientific research -- be beneficial for both students and universitiesincrease the burden of the government -- higher expense on education[sb/sth]/// the tax should also be allocated to many other aspects which are as important as the education;

　　Step 3:確定framework

　　知識點(diǎn)回顧之文章結(jié)構(gòu)：

　　l introduction -- 讓步 -- 反駁 -- conclusion

　　l Introduction -- 主體段1 -- 主體段2 -- conclusion

　　Tips：考生需尤其注意讓步段的文脈搭建方式，常用讓步段結(jié)構(gòu)如下：

　　A. 承認(rèn)對立面合理性;

　　B. 承認(rèn)對立面合理性+弱化其合理性;

　　C. 承認(rèn)對立面合理性+闡明其不合理性;

　　Framework示范：

　　Position: disagree

　　讓步：合理性：provide educational opportunities[especially those in poverty-stricken areas]

　　弱化：set up scholarships // loans to assist the students -- scholarships[effective way to motivate the students to study hard]

　　反駁：1.Students are less likely to hold an earnest attitude towards their study

　　2.increase the burden of the government -- higher expense on education[sb/sth]/// the tax should also be allocated to many other aspects which are as important as the education;

　　Step 4:習(xí)作

　　下面以過往考生的文章做一個(gè)常見問題分析及修改示例：

　　Introduction略

　　知識點(diǎn)回顧之開頭段“亮點(diǎn)”寫法：

　　1. 倒裝+設(shè)問;

　　2. adj.褒貶義暗指立場;

　　3. 有意識提高語法豐富度【如獨(dú)立主格/同位語從句等】;

　　讓步段：

　　學(xué)生文章：

　　Admittedly,【缺少必要的中心句】 there exits【拼寫錯(cuò)誤】 the phenomenon of poor or needy students giving up admissions of university. Though some of them have high intelligence or unremitting efforts，the tuition is a stumbling block in their way towards bright future【與上下文內(nèi)容脫節(jié)】. Here comes the question: is free university education the only way to resolve the matter? The answer is definitely “ No”. Various methods can make up the shortage of fee. For instance, pupils can pick up part-time jobs.【缺少必要的銜接詞】 Some people may argue that part-time jobs will have a detrimental influence on study. There are also other solutions. On the one hand, through hard-working, scholarships are gained. On the other hand, grants and student loans are provided by the government. Pupils have the alternative to pay off bills after they have the ability【句式豐富度較低 多以簡單句為主】.

　　問題總結(jié)：

　　1. 讓步段及主體段都需要有明確的中心句來表明論點(diǎn)，且需要適當(dāng)?shù)恼撟C過程;

　　2. 論證過程中需注意論據(jù)之間的邏輯關(guān)系，且通過明確的銜接詞來體現(xiàn)關(guān)系;

　　3. 詞匯語法豐富度不要忘記;

　　修改版：

　　Admittedly, the financial support by the government can be beneficial for some students, especially those in the poverty-stricken areas. To be specific, this way can assist them in covering【V.支付】 the tuition and receiving the valuable chance of experiencing college life, thus drastically increasing the educational degree【現(xiàn)在分詞做結(jié)果狀語】. However【弱化或駁斥時(shí)給出必要的轉(zhuǎn)折邏輯詞】, it is generally acknowledged that all the colleges and governments have already set up a variety of scholarships and aid loans for students who cannot afford the fees【限制性定語從句】. Besides, scholarships can be regarded as an effective method to motivate students in the universities. Therefore, there is no need to prompt【促使--替換make】 the government to bear all the financial pressure.

　　l 讓步段段首信息詞擴(kuò)充：

　　Admittedly/undeniably/granted,....//there is no denying that....

　　l 轉(zhuǎn)折邏輯詞擴(kuò)充：

　　nonetheless/on the contrary/by contrast/conversely

　　反駁段1：

　　Meanwhile, if students pay the tuition at their own expense【條件狀語從句】, students can hold a more earnest【認(rèn)真的】 attitude towards academic study. Actually, people tend to treasure【活用詞性】 what they obtain by their own efforts, and despise【輕視】 what is given free. The situation is similar when it comes to college education. In other words, those students will undoubtedly be more dedicated to the curriculum in order to acquire better results since failing the exams not only require the undergraduates to retake the courses, but also means paying extra money for the credits【學(xué)分】【原因狀語從句】. 【在說理論證內(nèi)容足夠充實(shí)的情況下，可增添舉例或?qū)Ρ日撟C提高論證方式多樣性】 [舉例論證] For example[personal story], ...//[對比論證] However, with the government financing the tuition【獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)】, students may be nonchalant【漠不關(guān)心的】 even if they flunk【不及格】 in the final examinations【讓步狀語從句】.