Do you agree or disagree?
The most important problems can be solved during our lifetime.
Step 1:審題
知識點回顧之“絕對題”破題法:
破題法一: agree -- 證明絕對詞存在的必要性或和合理性;
破題法一: disagree -- 世事無絕對;
本道題屬于絕對題的范疇,討論的中心事件為最重要的問題是否能夠被解決;這道題給出的話題范圍比較寬泛且偏抽象,因此下筆前一定要辨析題目中的“陷阱”,避免出現(xiàn)跑題或偏題情況;詳細注意點如下:
1. 準確定義“the most important”
錯誤陷阱 -- 討論偏哲學類或過于學術性的論點【與生活無太大關聯(lián)或論證過于抽象難以論述】,如人為什么活著;
正確思路 -- 首先明確解決問題的主體為human,其次可定義出這些問題是所有人都有可能面臨的問題;換句話說,題目要求討論的問題應該是和人們生活息息相關或者對于社會發(fā)展至關重要的問題,比如說環(huán)境/出行/健康/教育/經(jīng)濟等方面產(chǎn)生的問題【根據(jù)以上aspects可具體出problems:pollution/traffic inconvenience/disease/illiteracy/poverty 等,以上問題均可以作為例證使用;】
2. 時間線的完整度 -- during our lifetime
正常情況下,該條時間線表示from the past to the future。但是在論述時,我們不可避免的會將問題分為能解決的及不能解決的,對于不能解決的這一部分問題,不僅需要論述從過去到現(xiàn)在的情況,也需要論述將來的情況,盡量保證扣題完整度;
3. 定準論證核心 -- why
題目要求討論最重要的問題是否能夠被解決,所以請考生一定注意論證核心是“為什么這些問題能/不能被解決 -- why”,而不是“有什么問題被/沒被解決-- what”;
Tip:雖然審題步驟花費時間較短,但是對文章的整體把控至關重要,所以同學們一定要提高重視程度;
Step 2 :確定framework
Position: disagree
讓步:
part 1: 承認合理性 -- some problems have been dramatically solved
Part 2: 弱化合理性 -- other problems have not been solved
反駁:reasons
1. humans’ flaws;
2. problems may keep worsening
Generally【適當添加副詞緩和信息推進速度--注意節(jié)奏由慢到快】,there emerge an increasing number of vital problems in modern society. However, whether human can fix these troubles during our lifetime【主語從句】 is still an controversial issue. From my perspective, hardly can such problems be solved during that period【小短句也可設置語法點 -- 部分倒裝句】.
Admittedly【不要忘記讓步段信息詞】, some matters have been dramatically solved. 【話題過于抽象時活用例證】 Take the illiteracy as an example. Owing to the economic growth, the government and private firms can provide sufficient resources to support the education. To be specific, they can set up some scholarships and student loans【貸款】 to children who cannot afford the tuition【限制性定語從句】. In that case, the educational degree has been drastically increased in some poverty-stricken【貧困的】 areas or underdeveloped countries. However【轉(zhuǎn)折弱化其合理性】, the matters like poverty can not be settled【解決】 in our lives. Although people have struggled to eliminate the poverty for centuries【讓步狀語從句】, a great number of people cannot have access to the basic necessities even in some developed countries like America. That situation will continue in the subsequent【接下來的】 centuries【未解決的問題要提及“future”的情況--保證扣題度】.
The first reason why those problems always exist is that human themselves are born with some imperfections【表語從句】. As is known, many of defects can never be overcome, so the problems, which are the result of the deficiencies[deficiency缺陷]【非限制性定語從句】, can also never be addressed. For instance, many entrepreneurs are driven by their greed so that they make profits at the expense of the environment, thus prompting【促使】 serious environmental troubles such as air pollution or soil degradation【現(xiàn)在分詞做結果狀語】. What’ more, if people want to alleviate【緩和】the problems【條件狀語從句】, they should devote not only a large sum of money but also tremendous effort in the next few generations. Secondly, problems may keep worsening【考生可根據(jù)建議思路自行練習】.....
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